大家好，我是来自加拿大的雅思老师麦克。今天，我们来看看七月17号的雅思大作文真题。
# 上题：
The main aim of advertising是to increase的sales of products
people做not really need。你在多大程度上同意或
不同意？
# 题目分析：
Type: Opinion(不同意，但有例外)
*Body 1:商业的主要目标是利润，广告是传递利润的工具。"创造需求"
*Body 2:如马斯洛所示，大部分消费品都是需要的。
# \-模型答案高分范文-
# \ -文章分析范文解析-
# \ - (1)简介-
_Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question:_
*的主要目标
*广告=广告
to increase=日益
sales of products=购买产品（从不同角度)
people=消费者
*做not really need=不需要
"意见"类型消息的标准短语：
*有人相信
*毫无疑问
* ;然而，我不同意认为
显示衔接的词；):
*那里
* ;然而，
Vocabulary:
*拱上整体的
*消耗品消费品；消耗品
# \-(2)Body 1-
g>Aspects that must be referred to:* main aim of advertising is to increase the sales of products
Standard IELTS essay phrase:
* It is clear that the main reason for … is
* some people believe
Vocabulary and Collocations:
* revenue 收益；营业额
* be generated 产生
* profit 利润
* be obtained 获得
* It suffices to state then, that 这足以说明
* is part and parcel 不可或缺的组成部分
* revenue growth 营业额增长
* place advertisements 投放广告
* the public domain 公共领域；公有领域
* precisely how
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns]
(C&C;)
* , of course,(interjection)
* By doing this, (cause)
* , all companies infact, (interjection)
* , and thus, (effect)
* , that (connective)
* , for without it,(contrast)
* , as being able to(reason)
* , and hopefully(interjection)
\-- (3) Body 2 --
Aspects that must be referred to:
* products that people do not really need
Standard IELTS essay phrase:
* As to whether
Vocabulary and Collocations:
* indispensable 不可或缺的
* a contentious issue 有争议的问题
* to discern 识别；分辨
* to evaluate 评估
* Maslow’s ‘Hierarchy of Needs’ 马斯洛的需求层次理论
* highly pertinent 高度相关
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns]
(C&C;)
* As to whether,(signposting connective)
* , however, (contrast)
* Absolutely (emphatic interjection)
* And (connective)
* This is especially true if (referencing + hypothetical)
* When (conditional)
* what is a need and what is not, so… (showing dichotomy)
* , for example, (example)
* Who (referencing)
# \-- (4) Conclusion --
Standard IELTS essay phrase:
* In conclusion,
* there is no doubt that
* , I disagree that
Vocabulary and Collocations:
* plays a critical role in 在……中扮演着重要的作用
* commodity 商品；货物；日用品
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns]
(C&C;)
* through (how)
* allowing (effect)
* ; however, (contrast)
* , and in fact,(interjection)
今天就分享到这里，下期见！
